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northernbillfan
11-11-2005, 05:23 AM
Found a couple examples of great proof reading and editing this morning:

Nice typo here (http://www.kfoxtv.com/nfl/5299858/detail.html)


Opening sentence here (http://cbs.sportsline.com/nfl/story/9035890) reads more like never ending blather:

All the Buffalo Bills need do to learn what the run-happy Kansas City Chiefs are like without Priest Holmes is look at last weekend.
:scratch: HUH?

Good articles tho despite the poor editing and proofing.