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Originally Posted by billsfanone
yeah...thanks. :up:
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Originally Posted by billsfanone
yeah...thanks. :up:
I was wondering when someone would point out that there's already an error in the 3rd word of the essay. Plus it is very generous of Honey to comment on this in a friendly-like way, considering the overall thesis.Quote:
Originally Posted by honey
Maybe we should just re-write the essay, each taking a paragraph?
The least painful way to improve your grammar is to start reading books for fun. You can pick topics you like, fiction or non-fiction, and you will pretty much be exposed to correct grammar naturally.
"For years the deadly tendrils of cigarette smoke wafted through most American homes and businesses. That began to change with the Surgeon General's report..."
Patti
wow, this is a blast from the past!
Do we know if he got into college?
Patti
It's not THAT old a threadQuote:
Originally Posted by Discotrish
I don't know. I heard he was accepted to a wide variety of prisons.Quote:
Originally Posted by Discotrish
Haha. Well cigarettes are hot commodities in prison.Quote:
Originally Posted by RedEyE
Actually if he was in 10th grade in Jan 2004, he'd be starting his freshman year of college right now. Or are we assuming he'd be held back due to his essay-writing skills?
Patti
Oh but it is though... The thread was started in January 04, he was in 10th grade. Which means in Jan 05 he was a junior and Jan 06, he was a senior. Which means he'd be just starting as a freshmen in college a few weeks ago. That's all based on the idea that he got much better at writing and actually passed each grade and what not...Quote:
Originally Posted by The_Philster
Hm..I forgot he was that old...I was thinking he wasn't in 10th grade when he wrote that...but that he was in his 10th year
Suuuuuuuuuuuure Phil... everybody in the US school system counts the years they've been in school instead of what grade they are in. A likely story indeed!
:rofl: Sorry, I just wanted an excust to say ROFL
Actually, I meant years since birth ;) :lol:
Oh God... if that were the case then those guys were rediculously brutal to him!Quote:
Originally Posted by The_Philster
consider who some of those people are :laughter:Quote:
Originally Posted by BlackMetalNinja
:wave:Quote:
Originally Posted by The_Philster
I wonder if he ever ended up becoming a Black Smith? :huh:Quote:
Originally Posted by billsfanone
Yeah. He's the new janitor there. He has a set of keys and everything.Quote:
Originally Posted by Discotrish
The problem is that if you take his keys and shake them in front of him he gets all mesmerized and just stares at them while mouthing the word "shinny" :ugly:Quote:
Originally Posted by billsfanone
Moving this to HoF Now!!!