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    Hey, want me to write it for you? I'll do all your school work! And I'll only charge $20 a paper!
    Resign our own guys!

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    Originally posted by The Spaz
    Take this wole thing and copy and paste it into Microsoft Word it will help!
    its in word...word spellcheck sux

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    Originally posted by billsfanone
    Many children whose parents smoke develop pneumonia and wheezing more often then children’s who parents don’t smoke.

    Dude, every sentence if f'ed up!
    whats worng with that sentence?

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    Originally posted by BillsOwnAll
    its in word...word spellcheck sux
    It's only as good as its user.

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    Don't forget that many teachers smoke, so you will probably fail just for pissing her off.

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    Originally posted by BillsOwnAll
    whats worng with that sentence?
    A lot.

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    Go to your counselor and get into a finger painting class. Now. Go on run along.

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    Originally posted by yledust
    Don't forget that many teachers smoke, so you will probably fail just for pissing her off.
    I'd smoke a lot more than cigs if BOA was in my 10th grade class.

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    Originally posted by lordofgun
    I'd smoke a lot more than cigs if BOA was in my 10th grade class.
    That may be his only hope to pass.

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    Originally posted by billsfanone
    Many children whose parents smoke develop pneumonia and wheezing more often then children’s who parents don’t smoke.

    Dude, every sentence if f'ed up!
    That is one fd up sentence....

    .....children's who parents.......

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    Then vs than
    Many children... ...more often

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    Originally posted by THATHURMANATOR
    That is one fd up sentence....

    .....children's who parents.......
    When THURM notices mistakes, you know it's bad.

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    Originally posted by BillsOwnAll
    BTW i indented on the paragraphs dont know why it didnt indent when i posted it.
    That's why Professor BF1 flunked your butt the first time around BOA...he's a real stickler for indentation. Now get it right or start coming to the realization that your lifetime occupation will require you to wear a hairnet for the rest of your life!:hammeru:
    Last edited by mchurchfie; 01-14-2004 at 03:46 PM.

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    Originally posted by billsfanone
    Then accept your d- with pride.

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    Originally posted by lordofgun


    When THURM notices mistakes, you know it's bad.

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    Billsownall.don't let bf1 get you down,he is a little hard on you but he is right.You got all the facts ,but it sounds like a 10th grader.Your approach needs work.
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    Originally posted by ticatfan
    Billsownall.don't let bf1 get you down,he is a little hard on you but he is right.You got all the facts ,but it sounds like a 10th grader.Your approach needs work.
    Get down? I'm trying to motivate him!

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    ok...i revised it

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    If I was your teacher, I wouldn’t only fail you, but I would subject you to viscous ridicule.

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