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Originally posted by billsfanone
Yeah, smoking is bad. I get it. I'm just trying to help you. Consider me the Bill Parcells of essays.
Yeah, smoking is bad. I get it. I'm just trying to help you. Consider me the Bill Parcells of essays.
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Slippery Rock UniversityOriginally posted by BillsOwnAll
what college? where you ina ferternity?
No Fraternity...Comment
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gets my vote for worst grammar award
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did you read the revised one?:pimp:
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Listen to BF1-
He proof reads papers for a living.
You have a choice, BOA. Get upset when people point out the 500 mistakes, or learn from it. "It's readable" is a long way from "It will pass" .Comment
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But a big
for you to come here and ask for help. Think of us as 50 substitute parents.
How about you and Uncle Dozer light one up over a few beers?Comment
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id rather keep that thought outta my head......Originally posted by Dozerdog
But a big for you to come here and ask for help. Think of us as 50 substitute parents.
How about you and Uncle Dozer light one up over a few beers?Comment
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but bf1 doesnt understand im in 10th grade :).Originally posted by Dozerdog
You have a choice, BOA. Get upset when people point out the 500 mistakes, or learn from it. "It's readable" is a long way from "It will pass" .Comment
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In all honesty, and not to be mean, your grammar skills should be better than that in 10th grade though I found a lot fewer errors in the second version than I did the first. That shows you're making noticeable improvements. You did do a good job with the research thoughOriginally posted by BillsOwnAll
but bf1 doesnt understand im in 10th grade :).
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grammar sucks. i got a 73 on a grammar test today. thats not that bad.Originally posted by The_Philster
In all honesty, and not to be mean, your grammar skills should be better than that in 10th grade. You did a good job with the research though
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Yeah...but you want to always strive to do the best. Don't settle for a 73...work on earning that 93 or better.Originally posted by BillsOwnAll
grammar sucks. i got a 73 on a grammar test today. thats not that bad.
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LOL you cant just get a 93 ........its not that easy you have to do more than study...you have to be natruallly smart.Originally posted by The_Philster
Yeah...but you want to always strive to do the best. Don't settle for a 73...work on earning that 93 or better.
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That's just 4 above failure- I want to see you get at least an 80-Comment
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a 69 aint failing. 59 and below is failing.Comment
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BOA, I could go through your revision and still find bunches of errors grammatically and spelling-wise, but I won't - would take too long. Your summations are ok, but you should maybe check out the new studies on second-hand smoke.
Ummmm, can't resist - check out your first sentence. I think you mean "Smoking cigarettes IS bad for you..." not "are" bad for you. :)Comment
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